You've used a good range of shots, Toni, although I think you need to be a little more adventurous in terms of the range during the initial stages - it's rare for a video to depend upon such long takes. The camera movement is very good. The energy and charisma of the performance is good, and that's an important aspect of creating the "star", although you might want to watch the lip-synching, since it's a little out at times - a fairly crucial aspect. Think about the editing and how this relates to the rhythm/ tempo. Might be worth thinking about grading the narrative in a slightly different tone to the performance, although I like the "crossover" between the two. Overall, it's a pretty good first effort - you might want to think a little more about the narrative structure and how it's going to build. Well done
You've used a good range of shots, Toni, although I think you need to be a little more adventurous in terms of the range during the initial stages - it's rare for a video to depend upon such long takes. The camera movement is very good. The energy and charisma of the performance is good, and that's an important aspect of creating the "star", although you might want to watch the lip-synching, since it's a little out at times - a fairly crucial aspect. Think about the editing and how this relates to the rhythm/ tempo. Might be worth thinking about grading the narrative in a slightly different tone to the performance, although I like the "crossover" between the two. Overall, it's a pretty good first effort - you might want to think a little more about the narrative structure and how it's going to build. Well done
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