Here is the fourth rough cut of my video which is what I've been working on this past week or two. I've gotten more footage to fix the problems of night time scenes halfway through the video.
I've chosen a different opening to the video so that it starts in the house instead of in the car, which works better for the narrative as a day in the life always starts off in the house.
I've also re-edited some of the footage in the bridge of the song so that the narrative makes more sense, now the video goes from dawn to dusk instead of random scenes of night time thrown in at different places.
The sequencing is more in time to the music I feel, however upon watching the video once exported, I did realise there were a few more shots which need to be edited to the bars of the music as it still looks a little glitchy and jumpy in some places.
In the next couple of days I will be screening this cut to members of my target audience as it is useful for feedback and I can use it for the final cut, to make any changes that would add more appeal to my target audience.
Now I need to work on my digipack and advert - I already have the majority of the images I plan to use for it as I did a shoot back when I was filming the footage. These will be compiled together for a mock up within the next week.
Until next time,
Toni
Just to reiterate the comments I made in the lesson - I think this is close to completion (possibly two more edits?). You need as a whole to tighten up the editing - there needs to be more consistency with the transitions (in terms of pace and type) and you need to be a lot tighter with hitting either the beat or the ends of particular lines. The editing when the pace of the song speeds up needs to be a little faster, as does the climax. As mentioned, I think you should start with a shot of the house at dawn to establish the setting/ tone.
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